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 description: Software isn't all that matters; learn about the hardware tools you use every day to protect your privacy.
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-When it comes to discussions about privacy, hardware often is not thought about as much as what software we use. Your hardware should be considered the foundation on which you build the rest of your privacy setup.
+When it comes to discussions about privacy, hardware is often not thought about as much as what software we use. Your hardware should be considered the foundation on which you build the rest of your privacy setup.
 
 ## Picking a Computer
 
-The internals of your devices process and store all of your digital data. It is important that all devices are supported by the manufacturer or developers and continue to receive security updates.
+The internals of your devices process and store all of your digital data. It is important that all devices are supported by the manufacturer and developers by continuing to receive security updates.
 
 ### Hardware Security Programs
 
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-The most important thing to think about with routers is keeping them up-to-date. Many modern routers will automatically install updates, but many others won't. You should check on your router's settings page for this option. That page can usually be accessed by typing `192.168.1.1` or `192.168.0.1` into the URL bar of any browser. You can also check in the network settings of your OS for "router" or "gateway".
+The most important thing to think about with routers is keeping them up-to-date. Many modern routers will automatically install updates, but many others won't. You should check on your router's settings page for this option. That page can usually be accessed by typing `192.168.1.1` or `192.168.0.1` into the URL bar of any browser assuming you're on the same network. You can also check in the network settings of your OS for "router" or "gateway".
 
 If your router does not support automatic updates, you will need to go to the manufacturer's site to download the updates and apply them manually.