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minor editorial updates to Section 3
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"steps", possibly including an initialization of the end
entity's equipment. For example, the end entity's equipment
must be securely initialized with the public key of a CA, e.g.,
using zero-touch methods like BRSKI {{RFC8995}} or SCTP {{RFC8572}}, to
using zero-touch methods like BRSKI {{RFC8995}} or SZTP {{RFC8572}}, to
be used in validating certificate paths. Furthermore, an end
entity typically needs to be initialized with its own key
pair(s).
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different administrative domains; it is called an "intra-domain cross-certificate"
otherwise.



1. Note 1. The above definition of "cross-certificate"
1. Note: The above definition of "cross-certificate"
aligns with the defined term "CA-certificate" in X.509.
Note that this term is not to be confused with the X.500
"cACertificate" attribute type, which is unrelated.

1. Note 2. In many environments, the term "cross-certificate", unless further
1. Note: In many environments, the term "cross-certificate", unless further
qualified, will be
understood to be synonymous with "inter-domain cross-certificate" as defined
above.

1. Note 3. Issuance of cross-certificates may be, but is
1. Note: Issuance of cross-certificates may be, but is
not necessarily, mutual; that is, two CAs may issue
cross-certificates for each other.

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producing a certificate, some means for publishing may be
needed. The "means" defined in PKIX MAY involve the messages
specified in Sections {{<sect-5.3.13}} to {{<sect-5.3.16}}, or MAY involve other
methods (LDAP, for example) as described in {{RFC4511}}, {{RFC2585}}
methods (LDAP, for example) as described in {{RFC4511}} or {{RFC2585}}
(the "Operational Protocols" documents of the PKIX
series of specifications).

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the end entity in question has had no previous contact with the PKI,
except having received the root CA certificate of that PKI by some
zero-touch method like BRSKI {{RFC8995}} and
{{I-D.ietf-anima-brski-ae}} or SCTP {{RFC8572}}. In case the end
{{I-D.ietf-anima-brski-ae}} or SZTP {{RFC8572}}. In case the end
entity already possesses certified keys, then some
simplifications/alternatives are possible.

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is produced. Note that the real-world initiation of the
registration/certification procedure may occur elsewhere (e.g., a
personnel department may telephone an RA operator or using zero touch
methods like BRSKI {{RFC8995}} or SCTP {{RFC8572}}).
methods like BRSKI {{RFC8995}} or SZTP {{RFC8572}}).

The possible locations are at the end entity, an RA, or a CA.

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