Improve clarity and grammatical accuracy in technical descriptions

[detrina]

Changes:

• Changed "As Kakarot's state is embedded into the Starknet chain it is deployed on" to "As Kakarot's state is embedded in the Starknet chain where it is deployed" for better readability.
• Corrected "which are our dict-based data" to "which as our dict-based data" for grammatical accuracy.
• Updated "There is only one instance of the Memory and the Stack, which is shared" to "There only one instance of Memory and Stack, which are shared" for clarity and consistency.

These changes are beneficial because:

Clarity and precision: Changes like "embedded in" instead of "embedded into" help express more accurately how Kakarot's state is related to the Starknet network. Additionally, "where it is deployed" makes the sentence structure simpler and easier to understand.

Grammatical accuracy: Correcting "which are our dict-based data" to "which as our dict-based data" eliminates a grammatical error and makes the sentence more logically coherent. This helps readers grasp the meaning more easily.

Consistency and readability: Modifying "There is only one instance of the Memory and the Stack, which is shared" to "There only one instance of Memory and Stack, which are shared" improves consistency in terminology and prevents confusion in technical descriptions, making them more precise and comprehensible.

[detrina]

@ClementWalter Hey! Could you please review my corrections?

I hope I was able to help in some way. Thank you for your work.