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Markdown File Suggestions #1

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pwdel opened this issue Dec 20, 2018 · 5 comments
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Markdown File Suggestions #1

pwdel opened this issue Dec 20, 2018 · 5 comments

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pwdel commented Dec 20, 2018

This is a running list of markdown file grammatical and punctuation suggestions as I see them.

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pwdel commented Dec 20, 2018

Hereafter we will usually just refer to it as the "gateway".

Hereafter we will usually just refer to it as the "gateway."

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pwdel commented Dec 20, 2018

brand. And instead of downloading a different app for each brand, you can manage everything from one place, using any web browser.

brand. Instead of downloading a different app for each brand, you can manage everything from one place, using any web browser.

No, "and" needed as transition at the start of the sentence.

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pwdel commented Dec 20, 2018

such as the RPi 3 B+.

such as the RPi 3 B+.

such as the [RPi 3 B+](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-b-plus/).

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pwdel commented Dec 20, 2018

Plug the gateway into a power outlet using at least a 2A USB power supply. (Cell phone charging USB power adapters will not provide sufficient power to run a Raspberry Pi gateway.) After applying power, you will need to wait 2-3 minutes for compressed software images to be unpacked, and for various install scripts to run, before proceeding to the next step.

Plug the gateway into a power outlet using at least a 2A USB power supply.:

  • Important Note: Cell phone charging USB power adapters will not provide sufficient power to run a Raspberry Pi gateway. Ensure that you are using a power adapter with sufficient power supply.

After applying power, you will need to wait 2-3 minutes for compressed software images to be unpacked, and for various install scripts to run, before proceeding to the next step.

Plug the gateway into a power outlet using at least a 2A USB power supply.: * Important Note: Cell phone charging USB power adapters will not provide sufficient power to run a Raspberry Pi gateway. Ensure that you are using a power adapter with [sufficient power supply (https://www.raspberrypi.org/documentation/hardware/raspberrypi/power/README.md). After applying power, you will need to wait 2-3 minutes for compressed software images to be unpacked, and for various install scripts to run, before proceeding to the next step.

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pwdel commented Dec 20, 2018

(Note that it takes several minutes after first time power on before the network name will appear in the scanned list of Wi-Fi networks.)

  • Note: it takes between X and Y minutes after first time power-on before the WiFi network name will appear in the scanned list of WiFi networks.

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