diff --git a/content/news/2024-11-15-tiaas-hans-rudolf-lucille/index.md b/content/news/2024-11-15-tiaas-hans-rudolf-lucille/index.md
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--- a/content/news/2024-11-15-tiaas-hans-rudolf-lucille/index.md
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@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ date: "2024-11-15"
 tags: [training, TIaaS]
 supporters:
 - galaxy-europe
-tease: 'We were super happy to stand in front of a group of super motivated people to teach them galaxy and workflows.'
+tease: 'We were super happy to stand in front of a group of highly motivated people to teach them galaxy and workflows.'
 hide_tease: true
 authors: Hans-Rudolf Hotz and Lucille Delisle
 authors_structured:
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ authors_structured:
 subsites: [all-eu]
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-Since 2 years, we are offering to the scientists of the EPFL Life Science faculty a training called "Learn how to analyze your sequencing data in few clicks".
+For the second time, we were offering to the scientists of the EPFL Life Science faculty a training called "Learn how to analyze your sequencing data in few clicks".
 
 ![Sign](./IMG_3268.jpg)
 
@@ -23,6 +23,6 @@ Thanks to TIaaS, we could offer the students an easy to set up working environme
 
 We were working with the [Reference-based RNA-seq tutorial](https://training.galaxyproject.org/training-material/topics/transcriptomics/tutorials/ref-based/tutorial.html). It all went smoothly.
 
-Our trainees were PhD student to PI and seemed happy to discover what they can do with galaxy. We could also show them the [new IWC webpage](https://iwc.galaxyproject.org) and how they can go fast with them.
+Our trainees were PhD student to PI and seemed happy to discover what they can do with galaxy. We could also show them the [new IWC webpage](https://iwc.galaxyproject.org) and how they can make progress even faster with them.
 
 Lucille and Hans-Rudolf